Mary Austin’s “Mesa Trail” is a very descriptive selection.
The author uses great imagery to really give you a sense for the place. It
describes the plants, current of the wind, and wildlife in the trail in full
detail. This piece is very well written and extremely thorough.
In the reading “Polk Street”, the
work begins with a man looking through his window. He gives his perspective of
this street as it changes throughout the day. He starts in the morning and
describes the workers and businesses on the street. When he describes the
various workers he portrays them as simple people. He refers to multiple
things on the street as “cheap”, such as the “ cheap restaurants” and the shop
girls dressed with a “cheap smartness”. He moves into a new perspective when
the day gets started and people begin to visit the street. He says that there
is an array of people. He gives particular interest to the “handsome women” who
shop there. He describes them with certain awe. He comments on the kids that
swarm the street as they go to school and leave school. He describes the street
as it dwindles out and becomes empty only to fill up again with people out for
amusement. He then describes how the people dwindle out again until the street
is empty.
In
Frank Vanclay’s “Place Matters”, he says that a place is a space that is
invested with meaning to someone. Three necessary features of a place include
geographic location, material form and investment with meaning and value. There
are many pluralities of a place as different people can attach different
meanings to the same space. Place making can happen various ways including
story telling and community involvement. Vanclay also explains sense of space,
which is based on the individual and how the place makes them feel. The most important
part of sense of space is place attachment. One way to measure place attachment
is through space familiarity and space commitment. Place in fundamental to
humanity.
In
chapter 14 of “Joining the Conversation”, the text explains plagiarizing. Plagiarism
is intellectual dishonesty, and in most cases, is unintentional. It is
important when researching to always acknowledge the sources, accurately and
fairly represent the information, and provide citation information for your
sources. In short, you must always be careful because unintentional or
intentionally plagiarizing can put you into serious trouble.
All
four of these readings are very helpful for Writing Project One. Frank
Vanclay’s space matters, really helps to explain how a lens comes about, and it
will help me when I try to see it from a different perspective. Both “Polk
Street and “Mesa Trail” are great readings to start creating a lens because
they both are so in depth. Thinking like the characters in these readings will
help me get a different view of my place. I feel more prepared to write my
first draft after reading all four selections.

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